|Reviews for Lover Number Never Mind|
| sheasrebellion chapter 1 . 12/4/2004
I'm back! And your style is a lot different now. I gotta get with it.
Anyway, I like this one a lot. Short, simple, but it builds nicely to the last line. Which is, by the way, a nice work of art. The switch between line four and line five is quite nice, especially with the idea of ending and sorrow and then the impression of infatuation and love... it's really beautiful. I love it.