Reviews for Tears
Arutha chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
Alright! I like this one a lot. The style is a lot like a friend of mine from Xanga, and I must say, I love poems like this ;P I was particularly fond of the metaphor for suicide where you said "...and commits her last eternal sin." That's tight, keep it up maddame.
nick-wordsmith chapter 1 . 11/29/2004
Very well written and expressive. The way you repeated 'tears' and how it was like prgressive stages and each 'tears' seems to be gaining in power...

Stones decay, words last Nick
unexpectedwaffleiron chapter 1 . 11/29/2004
Wow. I loved the way you kept this in perspective; the way you always tied it back into the idea of the tears. But it seemed to me, that each time you started off "Tears", those tears were for a different purpose than the ones before it. Maybe it's just me XD Keep it up!Kon-Kavrae
My-BleedingPen98 chapter 1 . 11/29/2004
beautiful, and so