Reviews for at night i dream of
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
wow...imperial black ink lol
utopian sky chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
this is simply wonderful. that last line is so, so perfect (and needless to say, i love the second stanza). it's like you're writing for all womankind here. i think everyone can relate to this poem. genius.
AboveTheSalt chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
Oh I love this. Perfect way of capturing your emotions, I feel the same way often. Love it. Thank you.

-salt.
crooked on paper chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
Is there any other way to describe this other than "grand"? Because that's what it truly is. The cosmic imagery in here is beauty.
negligible fictional force chapter 1 . 12/13/2004
beautiful, dang it. simply beautiful. -kismet.
ylem chapter 1 . 12/10/2004
The last line seems to be a kind of paradox, not just of making love but of the way a car or an astroid would hit you, & you would have no way to get out of it's path in time. Which of course ties in beautifully with the beginning, which is just delicious.
hmmmmm chapter 1 . 12/6/2004
ooh. i love the feel of this veryverymuch. last line genius.
Nails For Your Crucifix chapter 1 . 12/5/2004
simple, but beautiful. I can almost see the surreal projection of this. Great job.

LOve the pen name btw.
clockwork kiss chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
Oh. That was nice. After sifting through a bunch of okay but barely-completelymissingthepoint poems about the starlit sky, this one was amazing. The imagery hit dead on, and the last lines carry it to an even higher plane. One of those feelings that you know you can feel in the pit of your stomach but are never actually able to describe. By connecting it to the sky, you give it kind of a universal(haha, pun) feeling, which is what it should have. Wonderful work.
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 12/2/2004
Beautiful, astounding imagery of the stars. And quite emotional at the same time as well.. it's like you're in awe because of the stars. Simple and sweet, I like.

Jenna xoxo
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 11/30/2004
The last line is a contrasting hook that rips into the magic fabric—interesting effect. m