| Reviews for The Realms |
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  Stacy chapter 10 . 1/10/2013 Keep writing please! |
 akaCHEEKS chapter 10 . 2/18/2008 after all this is done. she should kill herself. haha. then derek could salvage the good part of her. surely it won't be that hard for him. |
| Jones556 chapter 10 . 12/30/2007 I really wish you'd update this story, it was so good, and I loved the first one. |
| tour d'ivoire chapter 10 . 12/23/2006 -gasp- But this story is absolutely brilliant! |
| lokita 4 lyfe chapter 10 . 10/4/2006 I know I've said this before but... I FREAKIN LUV YOUR STORY! PLEASE update soon! |
| Desert Illusion chapter 10 . 6/3/2006 Yeah, okay so the plan is that Eve is going to lose what little control she has over herself and become pure evil I should say? But lets not lose "hope" right? Well, this twist certainly makes it all the more interesting. I still believe that Eve is strong, and when she needs to, she'll overcome her "evil half" and win the ultimate battle. Good is always supposed to triumph over evil. No matter what happens. Anyways, take care and please UPDATE SOON! ~Maha |
| BlueDragon11 chapter 9 . 5/9/2006 Interesting...No offense at all intended, but this is beginning to sound like your first story- meaning, the heroine single-handedly defeats Lucas. And I'm guessing that Eve will almost get raped by Lucas in the process... Though, I do like the line "Then, when you've got all their secrets, then you beat them." :) That's a nice spoof of the norm. |
| Desert Illusion chapter 9 . 5/5/2006 Oh wow...look who's back! Hehe! This was a nice chapter. Eve and her plans. lol! She reminds me so much of Lila. Hopefully, Eve will be sucessful in ridding Lucas for good this time. Her parents almost did, but well, kids are smarter these days, aren't they? ) So, UPDATE AGAIN! And lets finish off Lucas for good this time! ~Maha |
| JinHang chapter 8 . 4/3/2006 *blush* me? lol, no one ever gave thanks to me! i should thank you for the sequel! lol, i really like it so please update? :) cause i love your writing! |
| lokita 4 lyfe chapter 8 . 1/16/2006 YEA you updated! I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm just so in this story I can't stand to wait for more. ~Blu |
| Militarylver4eva chapter 7 . 1/14/2006 Hi, I just wanted to say that I read all 7 chapters of The Realms tonight and I am in love with your latest characters. I read the prequel to this sequel ( lol!) and loved it as well. When you ended Irresistible with Lucas dead body being taken from his grave, I didnt quite understand why. Now that I have finshed reading your current chapters for this story, I understand. He is back again in a role that shows his true colors. But i have to admit i like the idea of you making him half man and half bird. I laughed my head off when I read that. I especially enjoy reading about the intimate encounters that Derek and Eve have. You really have a talent when it comes to sex scene. I need to learn your technique. LOL! Anyway, Please update soon. militarylver4eva |
| lokita 4 lyfe chapter 1 . 1/5/2006 If I could only describe this story using one word... my brain would really hurt from thinking. I LOVE THIS STORY!you must hurry and add the next chapter before I go crazy! ~Blu |
| Lenka Penka chapter 7 . 12/3/2005 OMG NO ! do something she can't be stuck with that pervert...PLZ update.. this is wiked good..( and derek...-, yum!) |
| Danielle chapter 7 . 5/21/2005 I think your story is awesome! i can't wait until the next chapter...these stories are exactly what i've been looking for...thank you Eve of Dawn for answering my prayers!:) |
| BlueDragon11 chapter 7 . 5/11/2005 What the...? A bird man? You must update soon! |