Reviews for The Realms
Rose Richonne chapter 5 . 1/26/2005
not much to improve with this chapter. I don't really have any suggestions :) It was great!
sillymehoneybee chapter 5 . 1/23/2005
Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one and I hope the Festival finally comes around! And I wonder what Eve will wear? lol Bye!
Fluffy chapter 5 . 1/23/2005
Grand job, it was worth the wait, hope you update again soon.
Crazy Biene chapter 5 . 1/23/2005
This is funy...lol. Gr8 job
SilverMoonlitPath chapter 5 . 1/22/2005
wow... yes it was late but it was also long which i think makes up for that fact... one problem... you left us hannging... *tears fill up my eyes from the unwanted suspens... updates soon please...
Desert Illusion chapter 5 . 1/22/2005
YAY! An update from you...finally! LOL! Hehehe, anyways, this was an awsome chapter! Both of them are playing with each other, and want dominence over the other! Interesting! Can't wait for more of what happens on Tempest Festival Night! UPDATE SOON!

-Maha.
bibble chapter 5 . 1/22/2005
poor derek. such a teasing teasing eve. lemme guess. the mysterey man in her dreams is derek right? haha...i like long chapters.
sillymehoneybee chapter 4 . 1/21/2005
Please, please, please post the next chapter. Wow do I sounds desperate or what? Well I think your story is great and I just want to read more! lol
Guest chapter 4 . 1/17/2005
o interesting
chattygal chapter 4 . 1/17/2005
This is starting to be a great sequel! Please post the next chapter soon!
prisoner-of-the-night chapter 4 . 1/5/2005
Writers block is a bitch. find ur muse and u'll get through it with ease...i have mine...Smiles...its a great chapter...the ending isnt all that funny...its a good place to end it... update soon...

Love yas ~B~
BlueDragon11 chapter 4 . 12/30/2004
YAY! Can't wait for the next chapter. o.O At first I thought that Derek was always a centaur...but now it all makes sense.
SilverMoonlitPath chapter 4 . 12/30/2004
ok i love this story, but i have one question... how long will it be untill the Tempest Festival? i hope that its soon... but yeah up-date againsoon please.
Fluffy chapter 4 . 12/29/2004
Great story, can't wait till you update again, it's worth the time to wait. Keep up the good work!
Rose Richonne chapter 4 . 12/29/2004
I loved this chapter, it also gives a little more information on what is coming up whithout giving away anything. Great writing, please don't take too long before the next chapter :)
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