Reviews for Adoration
Patrick Vicens chapter 1 . 3/21/2005
I don't say much to poems, and im not a religious guy, but I liked this poem because it shows your trust and belief in something.
YK Author chapter 1 . 2/6/2005
This is a very uplifting poem. Since you wrote that this is from a church retreat, I can only assume that you are taking about God or some other higher being. This in itself gives this poem the before mentioned uplifting work! _
Lotus Bleu chapter 1 . 12/19/2004
hm... it doesn't really seem like a poem. it doesn't really have much rhythm to it. it is good, though, just not really poetic.

could you R&R some of my work?
Teperehmi chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
That was beautiful and so very true! Nice work! Please R&R some of my things if you'd like!
adeadaccount chapter 1 . 12/1/2004
Very beautiful! Well done!
Camman chapter 1 . 11/30/2004
good. It is nice. Perhaps some better formatting though, makes it seem longer than it should be. Otherwise perfect.