|Reviews for Soft eyes and sweet words|
| ossining chapter 1 . 3/6/2006
Well, I'd tell my fave line, but since it's a haiku, that doesn't really make a lot of sense, lol. It's so pretty, even though I'm not a huge haiku fan. I love how upbeat it is. Keep writing! :)
| gnimrodd chapter 1 . 11/30/2004
wow.. that is alli can say.. wow.-katherine
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 11/30/2004
Encapulated in 17 syllables—bottled up, love. Nice job. m
| willowzbitch chapter 1 . 11/30/2004
I love this, its so non depressing. it’s a symbol of love and I like it a lot, very beautiful haiku. The brittle heart bit, liked that also added depth to the haiku, a lot in fact it turned a simple love poem into a deeper and far more emotional piece sighting that the author had possibly never been loved before or had love an lost. Nice, very nice indeed!
| Camman chapter 1 . 11/30/2004
Short and sweet. The first line is very nice. I like it.