Reviews for Hallie's Comet
keepsailingkids chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
Cute. Great job, keep up the wonderful work dear.
aphroditeseyes chapter 1 . 9/4/2005
aw...this is so cute. I think you've just put down every girl's thoughts and emotions when it comes to their crush.
DuchessYappingDog chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
That's sweet. Sigh. But I don't get the last "i" at the end of the story. / Oh well. hahahahah.
Estelle chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
That is the CUTEST story! I love it. It would be very cool made up into a series. :) -Estelle
CheesyBiscuits chapter 1 . 3/26/2005
wow. this was pretty good. i think its safe to say that u accurately described how every grl feels wen it comes to her crush. u should expand on this idea. its seems lyk its worth reading.
flibbertigibbet chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
great story.. you hooked me