Reviews for The Lost Children
Oki Marino chapter 1 . 1/16/2005
I'm going to pick up my friends tradition of reviewing her own stories for good luck! So from Oki Marino to Oki Marino, Good Luck!
Ephemeral Seraphim chapter 1 . 12/2/2004
I think that this was a very interesting story, and I also like the idea about reincarnation. This story has a very interesting premise, and I do hope to see more of this in the future. However, I would suggest probably adding a little more description in between the dialogue sentences. A thing to help you is what where the characters doing in-between? If you don't add description, then you're characters are just a bunch of quacking heads at one another. Anyway, despite this, I've found this to be quite an enjoyable read, and the fact that this was based a little bit off of Peter Pan is also an interesting concept. You have talent, and do keep up the good work. It would be a shame to waste all that talent.

chibichocobo
Nisha Ziarre chapter 1 . 12/1/2004
That's really good. I really enjoyed reading it. I hope you write more of it soon.