|Reviews for The Limelight|
| white-clouds chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
(Too lazy to log-in) This is interesting. A bit confusing but it's wonderful. Lara;)
| Blood-Red Amber chapter 1 . 12/2/2004
You might gain from it while others suffer because of it? I think I understood that...Very good-'Dakae
| Ultimate Schuyler chapter 1 . 12/1/2004
...You know what? That's a PLOT. You take that, and you've got the plot of an entire story. Yep. That's amazing. Whenever I plan out my stories, the plots always seem longer than that. But, anyways, yes... This haiku was EXCELLENT. I especially like the word you used to describe the jealous of those not in the limelight: "burned". It was a scorching ending. And "fading limelight" makes it sound like a kind of star or something. Although, the fading part makes it seem as if the person won't be in the limelight for long... In short, good job. Would you review one of my haikus?
| gnimrodd chapter 1 . 12/1/2004
kiley! amazing! *sigh* how do you do it?