|Reviews for If You Give A Dragon Directions|
| CuteDawgz42 chapter 6 . 5/13/2013
Poor dragon. If I were there, I'd lick those tears streaming down your snout to comfort you.
BTW, How would the protagonist of this story react if I licked the tears from his snout with my tongue while he's crying?
| nightdragon0 chapter 6 . 9/8/2005
Seems like both of them are going to have a fit at their unicorn friend after this.
Looks like he got his first real taste of being a dragon here.
Though busting into a police station is going to be fun...
| Crauth chapter 5 . 9/7/2005
I feel really sorry for the driver-person (I forgot his name... sorry) and Guy as well. I mean, yeah, he's an irrtating little scale-ball stuffed to the brim with complaints, but I could get to like him, as a friend, not as a provider. -
Personally, I don't like unicorns. Harold just made that dislike much stronger. -
| nightdragon0 chapter 5 . 9/7/2005
Hehe, that was quite a stunt he pulled at KFC...knowing that he wouldn't be the one to get into trouble.
Though it seems things are reversed now. How to you deal with being a 5 foot dragon though? That'll be fun to see, flicking around the tail and scales.
Harold sure knew it was a good time to take off. Despite that, the arguement was rather amusing at some points...that I quite agree with.
| nightdragon0 chapter 2 . 6/12/2005
Well seems like he's at it again, heh.
| Alteng chapter 2 . 6/12/2005
Well, that was exciting. I'm surprised that Guy actually ask the narrator to pull over. No more dragon burps. It could be a toasty experience!
I did like your description of what the dragon was doing before the narrator pulled over. I liked the bit about the tail especially. Silly how certain things hit you just right.
Well, that seem it for now.
| Alteng chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
Well, this was a cute little piece. I don't normally like fantasy stories set in a normal world. Oh well. The dragon is an interesting little fellow, and little fellow indeed.
Interesting little footnote for you, and it makes no difference for your story. I live in Northern Kentucky, and my old High School used to be a castle. Just what we need in KY. A few dragons!
Florida seems to be a fine place for a dragon. Warm and all, you know, and they are serpentine. Oh well, then there is the magic bit, and don't bother questioning the logic of magic. But, I am reminded of the Xanth series with the Florida bit.
And there are louder things for the radio, but yes, Thank God it wasn't NSYNC!
| nightdragon0 chapter 1 . 12/4/2004
Bit of a rewrite? Heh, it's still just an enjoyable though
| See Sell chapter 1 . 12/2/2004
This is really good. It's smart, funny wicked and twisted. Hahahaha! _ but be careful, you don't want to give hitch-hiking dragons ideas. (I'm really rather fond of my fridge). Update soon
| Camman chapter 1 . 12/1/2004
first off, good title, the story, however, falls somewhat short of its name. Maybe it was just my intentions, but it was rather hasty. There are several points I enjoyed, one, how you made it so the dragon knew that only a specfic person can see him, and how only the dragon knows it, very nice on that point, and thuroughly explained. Two, when the guy, the main character (whom has no name), hits the brakes and finally realizes he is talking to a real dragon. Some things to consider, better description, add what the day is like, how the sun feels, what its like sitting in the car, how it feels to wake up... The ending was much to abrupt, flesh it out some. Otherwise it was a fun read.