Reviews for Dag And Andreyan |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey sweetie you know that you should have put up that other chapter too! You know I hate waiting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() flows smoothly, i cant wait to see what happens. too bad im out of time right now, lol. nice story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow seems like a great story off the bat! i cant wait to read more now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() BTW, I'm JM, lol. |
![]() ![]() Awesome except i was confused by the fact that he had almost 4,0 dollars in cash on him...thats kinda weird...i mean ...who has 4,0 dollars just laying about... Very good chapter though other than that...hehe...looking forward to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() JM here! happy birthday to me! Woohoo! I rawk! The story's going great so far! You guys are so close to the actual scene! (And I know there hasn't been that much love making so far, so I'm thinking of doing a lost chapter series, sh...)lia's gonna kill me! But I'm getting my own account soon, lol. bye bye! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, Adreyan doesn't want to tell Dag about his mom and his conversation? I liked the whole bottom horse thing, it was rather amusing update soon :D |
![]() ![]() Yay chris's dead *laughs evilly*...what he desirved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A.S.A.P *chants continuously*! Awesome chapter! Aww, they're so cute! Has Vance's name always been Vance? I don't know what it would've changed...but...my brain is playing tricks on me today *shut up don't tell them that*...um...I have to go now...*HELP ME*. Ok, sorry, just hyperactive atm. Mainly coz I got an update in this story! Absoloutely awesome! UPDATE SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whee... I love this |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() oo...hehehe (grinning like an idiot)] soo much to look forward too... lol... post another chapter soon! love that u posted on my fav holiday! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw they are too sweet - going back to the amusement park like that ;) and yay adreyan's moving in with dag - aw... and evil chris is gone now hahahahaha! oh so adreyan's having doubts about being a singer then? what's gonna happen? i cant wait for the next installment! luv n huggles Emerald RavenX x X ps: HAPPY ST. PATRICKS DAY! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() *giggling* They really are adorable. I like the band. And his mom doesn't make me happy... Um. Something that has been...lurking in the back of my mind about this. So meh...I would hate to see Gage want (love, whatever you can say here) Dag. Horribly cliche and I'd hate to see that happen to this story. Well, that's it. Lol. Hope you continue soon. |
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