I love it! Continue soon!

omg i totally love dirk! he's so cute! lol - i love agage as well...and halen is blatantly jealous! cant wait for more!

luv n huggles

Emerald RavenX x X

Yeah, I write Adreyan's story gets more hectic later on...Dirks a nice guy, but Gage is always cool. Having him throw Adreyan out of the dorm became a bit of a for the band members, I just love Ky and Blayne (Adreyan's peeps!)Lia's gonna get pissed off at me for reviewing my own story, so, whatever, hahaha!

hey! i love the tension with halen. I have to say that I personally don't like Dirk, but that just means you did a good job making his character kind of out there. Keep writing!

LOVE IT! I love Gage and I thought it was awesome how he picked up for dag and even tho he lets on that he dont like Adreyan that much, he called him his best friend, I think its sweet:) CAn't wait for the next chapter!

~*~ Sarah ~*~

P.S. your Welcome for posting thsi chapter:)

Hey Lorena!

Chapter 4 was awesome... I love how this story is going, though when dag and adreyan kisses... i was like "ok, i wanna stop reading now, but at the same time i wanted to see what else happened"

GREAT CHAPTER! can't wait to read more!

~*~ Sarah ~*~

go gage! yay! evil bigotted shitheads! i'm sensing scandal...please update soon!

luv n huggles

Emerald RavenX x X

it's was really good... i cant not think of another thing to say other than update soon

Great chapter. It was cute, and Dag took him to the amusment part, that was so sweet. Loved the chapter, and the story, Keep up the great work

omg! it was such a cute chapter! please, oh please, hurry up with the next one. *puppy eyes* please.

Hey again... jsut finished reading chapter 3, I really love how this story is going. And honestly I think it would make a super awesome movie! Its really awesome... one note, i wasnt expected Dag to go jack off near the end of the chapter, but, i guess there gotta be a bit of suspense as to whats gonna happen in the next chapters, lol. I can't wait for chapter 4!

Hey again... just finished reading chapter 2... and this story is going great! And I REALLY like Cage... lol even tho he isnt the main characters speaking, but hes cool. I love it.. and now im going to read chapter 3! keep writing:) byebye for now...

~*~ Sarah ~*~

Hey... its me Sarah. I just finished reading chapter 1... and as the both of you know, im not the biggest fan of homosxuals... i just dont really agree with the whole thing. And I told the two of you that I wanted to read your story just because you two are my friends, and you are both awesome writers. BUT I have to say that it is a pretty good story, I like it considering what its about. And I also have to say that its interesting, I like this Gage character. This story is awesome and im gonna read the next two chapters:) and the rest of the story once you post. bye bye.. loves ya!

~*~ Sarah ~*~

Critism... i only have a tiny bit of critism... its needs to be slightly edited, there are a few typo mistakes, now many only one or two.. lol... I just happened to pick up on them, other than that chapter one... RULES!

Gage... sounds like my type of man.. If you don't mind send him my way after he is done playing the gay sceen. . I love the story and wouldn't mind the CH sheets at is way to hyper... maybe you shouold tune him done just a notch... or seven... But then it would take away from his personality... Ah never I don't know what I am talking about anymore... hehehe... when do I ever?

Monnie-Chan

hehe it's cute I must say...gotta love Adreyan..or Andreyan either way? *hugs Adreyan* I can keep him to myself, if things don't work out with Dag-since he's bi P But yeah...I love the writing, keep it up, you two are good, can't wait to see what happens with the Carnival date _;