Reviews for Eternal Sleep
fadedrainbows chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
I really liked this poem. I, myself, do not approve of cutting, but you put the words so beautifully on paper (or rather the screen) that it ironically enough sounds peaceful. It's actually creepy that it sounds so peaceful. *shudders* Great job!

Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 12/14/2004
Oh My God! I cried, did oyu get inside my head for this? This is what I feel, right down to the last word. I didn't think anyone would understand me, but I see now that it isn't true.

I thank you from the bottom of my broken heart and soul for sharing.

Keep it up.
Out-Of-Reality chapter 1 . 12/8/2004
The ending wa powerful, maybe because it was repititous. I really liked it and couldn't relate to a poem more then this one right now!
aLifeofPain chapter 1 . 12/4/2004
Oh my hell! Thats soo good! I know exactly how u feel . . . Thats how im feeling right now. . . great job!~Alex
lunasilverstar chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
you got the emotions done just right. I really love this because I can relate so well. and thanks for reviewing for me so many times. it means a lot.

angel-of-woe chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
brill... i liked the bit at the ned with the "eternal sleep" line
twistedtruths chapter 1 . 12/2/2004
another good one. your thoughts and feelings get across so well.
Keith Andrew chapter 1 . 12/2/2004
Hey alex dont worry about it were here for you remember, now and forever. This is very well witten by the way-Love you Keith Andrew