Reviews for Someday
Kressida chapter 1 . 12/10/2004
this is beautiful alex, and also very sad and bitter. the word flow is great, and i really wich i could write like this, coz you're the best writer i know! love you lots and lots.. love zai
Out-Of-Reality chapter 1 . 12/8/2004
The whole reason i don't believe in love written right there lol. A saddening poem that brings up two guys. One of them sleeping behind me and the other away. Very well written and described!
Eleanor Gibson chapter 1 . 12/5/2004
Beautiful work, so sad, and emotional. You conveyed yourself quite well in the poem, the sadness (sorry, can't think of the word I'm looking for) in this is vibrant and stands out quite well, good job,-Rae
angel-of-woe chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
again brill gurl it can be so amazing how something as simple as an idea turns into a good poem like this, u go gurl
Keith Andrew chapter 1 . 12/2/2004
very good alex, alot of emotion and feeling here and very well expressed at that, nicely done-Keith Andrew