Fantastic. Quite simply, this is awesome.

your free verse is so much better than mine *goes to sulk* oh well. mines not that bad. I would kno if you'd REVIEW me more often (Hint-hint)Elise says you better still be her bestest buddy!

This is a great poem, excellant wording. But you have a typo in the title, and that kinda takes away from the initial attractiveness. Great job though.