Reviews for Hakencruez
Beth Tsany chapter 2 . 2/6/2005
I'm a lazy git, I know, but really, could you edit the format of this chapter? Without distinct paragraphs my brain hurts trying to read it.
Beth Tsany chapter 1 . 12/5/2004
Okay first, my nitpicky things: it seemed like you were trying to explain their past and their parents a bit too much. Sometimes a healthy confusion is a good thing.

You do, however, have incredible skill in creating the panicked nightmarish atmosphere. I'm totally sucked it. PLEASE continue asap.
xpurple chapter 1 . 12/2/2004
I have a soft spot in my heart for this kind of stuff.