|Reviews for Maybe|
| gnimrodd chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
*shrug* id on't know, i really liked the ending.. but that's just me.. anyway.. lovely job as usual"Maybe you let me sip this elixirSo you could stab me till I die" so.. mean? for lack of better words.. so deep.. so hateful.. i love it! muhaha! amazing job
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
Powerful and passionate, I love it, keep up the good work.
| Avery Rose chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
Very good, you built it up for a good ending and then I felt like you receeded in the ending. From "Maybe" I was let down a little... I felt like there needed to be more after you built everything up...I felt it comming that something great was about to be said at the end..and there wasn't. Lovely job building it up..don't think there's anything wrong with it...revisal is the best thing for writing and you.