|Reviews for Never Free From the Tarnished Past|
| Cassandra le Reille chapter 1 . 12/29/2004
The feeling of this was very... vague. It suited the piece, though, and I enjoyed it. Nice imagery, especially with a line like "Black and white, like the night sky, always falling, never free."
| nick-wordsmith chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
Nice work Sara. I like for this ended up. The one change I'd suggest would be to perhaps change it from 'stonewall' to something else. i think you could emphasise or play down the self-protective-barrier thing by changing that word.
Stones decay, words lastNick