|Reviews for Untitled Number 1|
| Carter Tachikawa chapter 1 . 2/9/2005
Very interesting poem. I'm gussing that it's about vampires, lot of the words are suggesting that. Anyway, I think it's good for only 9 lines. Like the rhyme too. Anyway, glad to hear from you again. Keep writing!
| Anjeni Windsinger chapter 1 . 12/4/2004
Vampires have always fascinated me, and you've done a good job with them here tonight. The change in language between the first two stanzas, intentional or not, helps bring the mood along; the first gives a sense of older days, while the second is more modern, so it brings a sort of timelessness to it. Well done.