Reviews for Death, Be Not Proud
ryuzaki chapter 1 . 9/27/2013
Whoa. Whoa...have you read the Book Thief? If not, do so! XD
Guest chapter 1 . 9/18/2013

this is awesome. i love love love love love love love love this. you're totally awesome. the end clincher was absolutely brilliant and left me breathless.
i love you.
'nuff said.
MethodlessMadness chapter 1 . 7/5/2013

Give me a few seconds to compose myself after reading that. Deep breaths, in, out, in out.

Okay. I will say this: that was incredible. Absolutely incredible. I love how Death was portrayed through this first-person POV, and I love... well, everything. The way Jesus was portrayed, Death's physical feelings when Lazarus was raised, the awesome Resurrection scene, the ending with the horse ("Oh yeah") and... well, everything. This was perfect. Just perfect. Thank you.
Airith chapter 1 . 12/25/2004
Man, what a story. That really rocked, yeah? It was funny and honest and you did an awesome story.

Some of the lines you had- "locked in the terrible combat to be born and give birth"- were really, really great. You did a really good job.
Official Rambler chapter 1 . 12/4/2004
Very well done. I've always viewed Death as mildly grumpy... and this is an interesting take. All the miracles around that time must have thrown poor Death for a loop. -
A.R.B chapter 1 . 12/4/2004
Okay, I loved this (says the non-christian). I love Donne's "Death be not Proud" anyway, and this was a nice take on it. Took me a bit to realize that it was Lazarus at first, but after that, very interesting. I especially liked it when Death talked about his added benifits at the end, and personified Sleep was a nice touch. The whole concept in general was very well executed. Loved it.