Reviews for Wish
Mista Mugs chapter 1 . 12/10/2004
I love haiku's, they can be so beatuiful and full of emotion.

Yours succeeded in this. Good job.

catseyeview chapter 1 . 12/9/2004
very beautiful...sadly in some way though
Mr. Ed chapter 1 . 12/9/2004
JohnDoe1043 chapter 1 . 12/9/2004
Aw... *mournful look* That's sad. Beautiful poem.
Radyn chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
Am I the only one missing the "deep" meaning of this?
nick-wordsmith chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
Oh she of little faith, the serial reviewer and bringer of hope to the writing hordes.

A nice haiku, but certainly not your best. Keep writing.

-Stones decay, words lastNick
Ultimate Schuyler chapter 1 . 12/6/2004
Aw. ;-; Sad.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/6/2004
hmm i expceted it to be about food lol.. ncie job though
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 12/5/2004
This was sad bu not overly so. Awesome haiku !

~ Noelle ~
sensitiveangel chapter 1 . 12/5/2004
this is very good! if you coud check out some of my work that would be cool.
mormonboy chapter 1 . 12/5/2004
great haiku.
Miz E. Mak chapter 1 . 12/5/2004
Cool haiku... although the syllables in the last line don't work quite smooth enough methinks. Nonetheless, I love it.

write on.
Nameless Melancholy chapter 1 . 12/4/2004
i like it. havnt read a haiku in a while ) (and its nice to read one that isnt and water etc.)
radiojames chapter 1 . 12/4/2004
Your work is truly inspiring is a colaberation possible?
Froggie0 chapter 1 . 12/4/2004
great little haiku! fabulous job! what i love about haiku is that to write it you have to write what you're feeling with only a limited amount of words, so it's sometimes hard to find a good one. great work!~Froggie0~8)
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