Reviews for Immortal Death |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... Just as wonderful as ever. I do hope nothing happens to Asher... like I said before. Nice work! |
![]() ![]() heyo!Will you ever update this? Lol. Just wondering. And good luck on exams! |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting dream, i wonder who that man was... maybe someone in her old life? exams r such a bother -.- but now theyre over - - |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, it was short, but it ended suspenseful. I wonder who the guy was in Aeolyn's dream and who was it that sent the vision to her. . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Indeed it was short, but still good. I know what you mean with the whole exams thing *shudders* I don't like em one bit. Anyway, can't wait to see what happens - Update when you can |
![]() ![]() ![]() mm the shortness is like a teaser ). a voiceless voice... so does he speak into her mind? can't wait for the update P *Silent Writer* Thank u 4 the review. Yeah, fangs... but u'll understand in Ch.5 (whenever that gets posted lol). Oh! Please don't forget to check the ch.2 note... i changed something! |
![]() ![]() ![]() devastating chapter '( well worded! u introduced a bit of science in this chapter.. its weird cause somehow fantasy doesnt mix with science - im not saying its bad, but its odd, thats all ] cant wait till next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, poor Asher! I feel like crying now. ( That was a great chapter. Poor, poor Asher...Anyways...XD. I can't wait to read the next chapter! *is hoping that Asher makes it out all right* |
![]() ![]() ![]() her aura fed the ebony sickness! ( thank you for the email... and for telling me that you updated! for some reason i didnt get an alert... erg to FP lol. Great job so far... im hooked! *SW* I know how you feel about the whole school thing... it sucks lol. update as it comes! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice descriptions - I really don't know what else to say... Lol, I have no more concrit to give you on this story(so far anyway). So, good job and keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I DONT'T WANT ASHER TO DIE! *cries* Update ASAP... By the way... I feel your pain with the work/tests/studying thing... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read about Asher... awe... *sniffle* -reads on- |
![]() ![]() sadness! *sobs* oh no! poor asher. hope he'll be ok. update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aeolyn's back to save the day again! XD! Well, we're starting to learn a little more about the sickness, but it's still kinda mysterious. I wonder where Mikhail went to. Can't wait to read the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() Aeolyn is such a brave and nice gal. sad sad chappie, but i like it! update soon! |