|Reviews for Immortal Death|
| Cloud Burst chapter 5 . 1/6/2005
so shes gonna embark on a quest to save all the lucrians and the angels eh? sounds just a tad bit cliche.. ur gonna add twists in it like u did to the first installment rite? rite?aww... asher is dying?
| Cloud Burst chapter 4 . 1/6/2005
oo so its lilah/the angel/her savior (well sorta) phyrel.. lovely name for a city of eternal twilight. it so fits i luv ur descriptions - like always! -i feel that lilah is hiding something from aeolyn... who was that woman in the blue dress? o.O
nice chapter! -
| Silentwriter9 chapter 5 . 1/6/2005
o! and she has taken the mission... quest... what would you call it? ). Great chapter... there are a few spelling mistakes and such but still good.
Asher is dying? :sniff sniff:
and where is Mikhail? *SW*
Thank you again for your reviews. I am sorry but i have reviewed everything of yours so i can't 'return' the rest of the reviews until you update... hee hee so update NOW! lol. I'm jsut kidding. ) Thank you so much again. I'm glad you liked 'Myths Made Real' it is one of my faves... and Zared getting a unicorn good or bad? well... what kinda character is he? so what does that make his unicorn? it is blood red for a reason! heehee ttyl Thanxs again.
| Laura Barton chapter 5 . 1/6/2005
Ep, I wanna know what's going on. The poor Angels, I never really thought they would die. But to me, this just seems to prove that nothing is immortal (except for maybe the gods/godesses). Good chapter and great story thus far -
| Hellsing-Gunslinger chapter 2 . 1/2/2005
aw, beautiful, like it. Can't wait for the next chapter
| Hellsing-Gunslinger chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
Oh awesome. I like this, its really good, keep up the good work.
| Stormie Greye chapter 4 . 1/1/2005
Great chapter! I think this was your longest chapter so far as well. Wow, the City of Eternal Twilight sounds beautiful and also the big castle where the archangel is. XD. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Also, I'm very much curious to find out who that woman in the blue dress was. My guess is that she's related to Aeolyn somehow.
| elasandra chapter 4 . 12/31/2004
YAY! Another chapter! I rather like Lilah, she's funny and such an interesting character. i love the descriptions. Who's the woman in the blue dress? Another interesting character? O...can't wait! Update soon!
| Silentwriter9 chapter 4 . 12/28/2004
o sounds great so far. You are so talented D. I liked how you put in: "“Oh, Melira? She’s probably gone back to her den. She’s the goddess of cats, didn’t you know? Every animal in the Moral Realm has a minor god and goddess of its kind. That is what prevents total anarchy from breaking out in the animal kingdom."
great little detail )Can't wait for your next update!
Thank you for your review on 'Your Dolphin' i hope nothing else happens to them either.
I am writing another 'Macabre Court' fic.. it is called the "Riders of Ebony" it should be up in the next few days... i think you will like it! D
| Skylar Lee chapter 4 . 12/27/2004
This is really nice... I like it. I believe you should update really soon. It's really, really good. I like it. Wait, I've already said that. Well anyway, it is good. _ Please update soon!
| Skylar Lee chapter 1 . 12/27/2004
I liked the first chappie. I shall read on to see if you did even better. This is very interesting. Strange like my own story... But I like your's better.
| Silentwriter9 chapter 3 . 12/26/2004
hey.. haven't i told you before that cliff hangers aren't nice? LoL.
I liked the chapter... there was one sentance that didn't make sense..
"When she opened them again, she knew was in Terithiea anymore." was to wasn't? or
"she knew she was in Terithiea once more."
besides that great chapter can't wait for the next update!
| Cloud Burst chapter 3 . 12/26/2004
a cat? a familiar voice? ur chapters r too short! [ XDupdate asap!
| Stormie Greye chapter 3 . 12/25/2004
Great chapter. I loved your use of descriptions. Was Mikhail the cat? I can't wait to read the next chapter! XD!
| Laura Barton chapter 3 . 12/25/2004
Ack, I can't figure out who it is. It'll probably bug me for a bit, but then I'll convince myself that I can wait for an update. - Nice chapter and please do update soon.