A CLIFFHANGER! NO! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! I mean, no pressure. lol

KEep up the great work! Love the descrip!

YAY! second chappie! Keep up the great work. Can't see where this story leads to!

This was a great chapter, and just the right length if you know what I'm saying. Not that long, but not that short either. Can't wait to see what happens next! XD

Grr, I want to know what he's hiding. - I like the story so far though escpecially since it's the beginning. Beginnings always leave me wondering what's really going on, and if they don't I probably wouldn't be reading the story. I'll be waiting for the next chapter

aw..reminds me of pandora's box, how the woman opened it and released the demons

hes hiding something from her o.O

mikhail's not gonna die, is he?..

cant wait till u update!

Your Welcome... don't know what i did but i got a thanks so.. lol )

I like it! I wanna find out so much more! But... :sigh: i have to wait for you to write it! lol

i liked the line:"He held his head in both hands, his wings of white and silver hanging without poise. Like a fallen Angel. Fallen from grace. Fallen from life."

i could picture it.

and they thought it was puppy love? erg to them lol

great start i can't wait to read more!

*Silent Writer*

Thank you for you review.. yes.. 'i' killed her (even tho it was adrian.. lol). I am trying to... create a story with the 'Riders of Ebony' i hope to start writing it and not just dreaming it in my mind lol )

Very interesting. I can't wait to see where this goes. Keep up the good work.

Goodie goody! Please update sooN! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Hmm... An interesting start. Like you implied, the chapter is rather short. Rather undescriptive as well. It doesn't seem like there's much to describe, but maybe something like the way they were feeling, be it fear or happiness or whatever. Meh, your story, not mine. It's just a suggestion for even just this prologue-ish thing. No worries, I'm sure it'll be great -

cliffhangers are not nice... i keep telling everyone this but no one listens!

anyway. Sounds really interesting so far... i can't wait to read more!

update as it comes to you please! )

*Silent Writer*

o a part two to the original story! D

wow - interesting o.O

Wow, that's a nice way to end the chapter. I'd like to find out what exactly Mikhail is talking about! Great beginning, considering it's so short. LoL. I'll look forward to reading the next chapter. Hopefully a much longer one but not extremely long.