|Reviews for Dirty Clean|
| Gaki Toki chapter 1 . 12/10/2004
Wow, I really liked this, I believe it shows in my expression as I read it but hey, you can't see me so here I am...telling you...oh nevermind, anyway I am SO with you on the spelling of "just" I can never spell it right...ha-ha...maybe it's just us...hey, I got it right!
| origamikitty chapter 1 . 12/5/2004
Maybe I just read it wrong, but you kept an amazing flow, it seemed, until the last 4 lines. I may've just been stressing the wrong words. But the poem was really good. kudos.