Well that all turned out nicely LOL! I really liked it!

I liked this story quite a bit. Its was pretty good The only thing, was that it seemed rushed... but still, I liked it :3

This was entertaining and interesting. The only problem I had with it was that it moved a little too fast once Jennifer arrived. Even if all of those old feelings came back and she knew she was still in love, she would probably need at least a little bit longer to fully comprehend the situation. And the dialogue with Mike at the end was also a little unrealistic. He wasn't even that surprised. But, that is just my personal opinion.

I hope you realize that I am only trying to help. :) One of my stories (a romance story) was highly unrealistic and many people on here helped me correct that. I am only trying to help you out like they helped me. _

Anyhoo, this was a pretty good story. Keep up the good work!

~Daphne~

aw! such a sweet ending. life is good when it all works out...sadly, that's rare. ah well. i loved this, as i love your other stories. you rock!toodles,Bobby