|Reviews for Century Folds|
| Mirotori chapter 1 . 4/2/2005
o, i like this! it's a very interesting introduction to the story, and quite wonderful in its descriptions. I'm not very good at those, I'm afraid. The dialogue is as formal as the first paragraph and, if you meant it to be that way, speaks some measure about their relationship and character. But if he was indeed not such an intellect as the girl, would he use such complex sentence structures and formality? I like the formality in her: it makes her seem like one of those types who reads too much. hmm... i'm gonna have to look in on this story when i get the chance to...