Reviews for Summer of the Japanese Beetles
hey maria chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
This was awesome. The twist at the end, Audy being imaginary, that surprised me so much that I felt a little dumb. I loved the bit about the moth...and the rainbow-colored ladybugs like Skittles. You're great at imagery. Again, a wonderful story.
Totsi chapter 1 . 8/30/2005
Wow.

Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

I love the way you wrote this. I can picture everything clearly in my head.
Bloodlilly chapter 1 . 12/26/2004
Awesome. just amazing. Did not see the twist coming at all, even though you mentioned it in the summary, and i can't tell you how great that is. You describe feelings so wonderfully, and I also appreciated the description of the smell of summer. Amazing work, this.
Vincere chapter 1 . 12/6/2004
Awesome story. You have a real talent!
CW-nerd-12 chapter 1 . 12/5/2004
Wow. This is incredible. I'm completely blown away by it. I love the originality, the freshness of it. You could have it published somewhere, win something with it, even. I, for one, found it quite easy to read, but I'm used to reading weird existential stuff, anyway, so that's me. Keep writin'!
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