|Reviews for Who Am I?|
| BeautifulEcho chapter 1 . 12/30/2004
excellent question that i wonder about WAY too much. i never know if im doing something right, how I want it to be done, and i have to stop and actually listen to my heart. great poem though and it really compared to ways in which i feel! good imagery and it deserves the angst genre! keep it up!
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 12/17/2004
That was fantastic ! Very deep and so cool. Highly original. Good job.
| Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 12/10/2004
good use of repetition of the first line in this poem. i especially liked the throwing the soul into the gutter and the living in oblivion bits. Well done!
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/9/2004
wow.. I liek it a lot.. very powerful
| dillpickleem21 chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
beautifully written...it really makes you think you kind of have to break down each line...you can really feel what the author's feeling.
| LilLaTLuv chapter 1 . 12/6/2004
WOW! Just WOW! That is the most explanatory word I can think of for this at the moment. I am impressed. Loved this, and I hope you keep it up!
Luv ya,Tashi :)
| DaybreakStorms08 chapter 1 . 12/6/2004
Wow, this is good! I love the transition - first it's self-pitying, then regretful, then vengeful, then satisfied. Awesome emotion, and I like the formatting too!
| Kaylee Sabrina Green chapter 1 . 12/6/2004
Wow I like this one alot! Keep up the good work