|Reviews for Now I Stand Alone|
| Luka J. Todd-Sorelli chapter 1 . 2/27/2006
hmm... where to begin? That was simply lovely; I loved your use of figurative diction, etc. ad infinitum, and you effectively convey a poetically astounding point. The first two lines... simply magnificent.
| Gir Garcia chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
Wow...that was nice. It's also very true. that was very beautiful.
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 12/12/2004
wow, very powerful!
| Siberia82 chapter 1 . 12/6/2004
My course website is taking a LONG time to load, so I thought I would check out your poem. This is marvelous! My favourite stanzas are: "Empty faces and hollow hearts / Venomous arrows and lethal darts" and"Your feeble excuse: you have no dime / To lend me from your small purse of time." Very original and clever imagery! The emotions are heartbeaking, too.
My only small complaint is that the last verse doesn't rhyme like the others, so it sorta breaks the flow at the end.
| NarakuYugureHimitsu chapter 1 . 12/6/2004
Sounds like the way I feel about the people who call themselves my friends. Good writing, keep it up.
| AngelaiR chapter 1 . 12/6/2004
I liked this poem a lot but hated the last line, it didn't fit, it cut the flow... toodles, please read, review. ~trippyangel