That was good. Funny and weird.

actually... that was pretty amazing... i would like to write more, but besides the fact that im considering to get an acc just so i can fave your stories..what else is there to say?

As short as this was, i still found it wonderful. I admire your skills as an author. I think a multi-chaptered story on this would actually be pretty cool.

ahh...lovely! beautiful end :)

Ri

this was so funny.

the "voice" or the voice of her friend is very amusing.

This was cute, subtle. It was almost sad, in a way-what if she's wrong? What if that's not the reason he's sending the cards? ...Aw. :D

The interview style is seriously creative. I love the way it starts, the way you lead your readers through the expertly woven web of the story, and the end is just... wow.

That was so entertaining to read. I don't quite get the ending. I'll reflect on it later. Props for making me laugh :D

I really really liked it. I want to know more about the characters!

Uhh... I didn't understand the ending

i found this story really amusing ;D

think about all the holidays.

i love the originality of this story. torturing someone with greeting cards? i love the idea of it! maybe i should try it with someone some time ..

haha.

anyway, thanks for sharing your story. keep up the good work :)

LOLZ. i found it funny. this might actually be a nice start or middle or end of a story or mini story or whatever. you can still keep this for reference though. make a story that is in third person so you can keep this so that the readers would have a peek into the character's POV.

Definitely random, but I like it!

Does he even send cards on Father's Day? :D

Haha, um... yeah.

Congrats for winning the SKoW thing, by the way. :)

Thats so creative and amazing! I love the originality of it all, I mean it's not every day (or ever, really), that you read about a man torturing his ex girlfriend (assuming it's ex)with hallmark cards.

The character was wonderfully portrayed, and it seems so well developed that you've borrowed her from something else...

I love how the ending really makes you wonder what he did before the cards to make her never forget him...first love? did she lose it to him? What?

However, I think that was part of the story, so I don't want answers. Plus, I love how open ended it is. It lets you wonder and do something hardly ever done these days: think. Wonderful job writing! I love how creative and amazing and gifted you seem to be!

WHOA, that last line blew me away!

It was a great ending line. It was also a good cliff hanger. (sigh) I wish there was more, and I wonder why they broke up . .

Great job on the story. You are an amazing writer.