Reviews for Desirae, After The Fact
deathfairy20 chapter 1 . 12/12/2004
very good keep up the good work
catching-falling-stars chapter 1 . 12/10/2004
wow! i really liked this. it's very deep. a lot of people, including me, can relate to it. keep writing!
JohnDoe1043 chapter 1 . 12/9/2004
WOW! "all are his toys"... *eyes bug out* This was incredible!
InFeRnOsKuLL chapter 1 . 12/8/2004
Very powerful poem...tho, one must never try to forget one's scars...those are the entites...that keeps one sane.
Saeger chapter 1 . 12/8/2004
Nice. Tells a story of... warning, is it? Or reminiscence? I dont know... But it was a sombering poem, for sure.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/8/2004
meant to find my wholes ...holesand fill it... fill them

I like it.. very powerful
for deletion chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
This is excellent. The word choice is great, the imagery is vivid... It's so deep. There are a couple of spelling errors, but overall, it's a beautiful poem.
Trajo chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
Wow. I really...I really can't say anything about this. There's so much pain and emotion thrown in to it. I wouldn't want to say anything accidentally mean. Or you could just be a really good pretender and fake the emotion, but I have a feeling its real. I don't know. Sorry, I'm not very helpful...it's just I can't bring myself to rip this to shreds.
xoxkissxofxdeathxox chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
I love it. Powerful. I like the staccato-like rhythm it seemed to have. It expressed it well, though it didn't flow so well in some parts. Keepy writing!
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
J—gut wrenching. m