Reviews for Red Horse
crazywriter321456 chapter 9 . 5/18/2005
interesting scenario...:) love it...it's nearly like the matrix or something...except the god thing...cool...umm... just a little note...the dialogue with the bartender and the sniper in the beginning didn't seem to realistic...just sayin'...hope you update soon!
crazywriter321456 chapter 8 . 4/26/2005
that...was very captivating and interesting, UPDATE NOW!
C. Catlin chapter 6 . 1/13/2005
ACK! Don't die! NO!

Cant wait to read more!
C. Catlin chapter 5 . 1/3/2005
Oh my, this is so flipping great! keep posting! I cant wait to read more! except that I STIll dont know what any of the charicters look like!

Sorry for any misspellingsCatnmur
Kamon chapter 5 . 12/20/2004
Bloody brilliant, biblical prophecies. You must carry on with this story.

What I'd like to know is the history of each of the factions, how did the Tribulation saints form and the same for the Horsemen.
Kiwi Raven Saotome chapter 1 . 12/12/2004
Epic story. I love it! You know, I love the gritty mood, too. Keep it up!
C. Catlin chapter 3 . 12/9/2004
Well, this storie is comming along good. But ther isn't enough char, develpment. Who are Jason and Brian? what do they look like? How old are they? And Marian too.