Reviews for Behind Your Walls
angel1357 chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
You know, I feel the same way with my friends. When in a group, of even three, they put up walls, but when it's just two, no matter who it is, they reveal thier true selves.

I've seen the inside of them, the only problem is when you don't know which is the show, what you see when your with just them, or the group? It's a question never to be answered...

Well, thanks for the review too!Keep up the good work.
fiercelaststand chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
I forgot you wrote this. I really like it :)Especially the last four lines, that's my favorite part.
marguarita chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
the poem was pretty, good, and strong, love the wording, Ian, keep writing :D
Hokeysmoke chapter 1 . 1/7/2005
Very interesting.

Romance poetry from a man's perspective always intrigues me.

If I had any complaints I'd say that your rythym seems to change after the 5th line, but it wasn't enough to make me stop reading, or feel uncomfortable.