Reviews for The Life and Times of Anna Du'Arte
SoonToBeMe chapter 5 . 5/21/2005
Nice. I think it would be a little bit more realistic if she was racist. I mean it is the 1800's. Perhaps she could grow to not be a racist as the story goes on. I especially liked the little bit of suspense before the final entry.
aims80 chapter 2 . 12/17/2004
Good beginning, keep up the good work.
Shadow of Isis chapter 2 . 12/17/2004
Eight years married to that jerk, your heroine must be sturdy. Was he always this way to her? Or was he dashing in the beginning? Maybe that's a question you can answer next time. A great chapter!
Cici Dash chapter 2 . 12/16/2004
Very intelligent and well written. There are spots where thigns seem a bit flowery BUT as this peice was supposed to have been written during the turn of the century it fits very well. A very nice job indeed, keep up the good work!
Shadow of Isis chapter 1 . 12/9/2004
I was hooked by the summary, and the first chapter didn't disappoint. You've certainly got the example of the mentality of a submissive victim of domestic abuse. I can't wait until she gets independent.