Reviews for Saru de Jaaki
Living in a story called life chapter 1 . 3/19/2005
Li naa!BlkGothPrincess
Delete Name chapter 1 . 1/26/2005
I'm just learning Japanese, but this is a haiku about monkeys so I'll make myself translate it fully. .
Stargate chapter 1 . 1/26/2005
Cool. A haiku about monkeys! Love it.
suga CraZie chapter 2 . 12/10/2004
oh so THATS what it means! My friend, for some reason is terrified of monkeys... I think she'll like your poem (she likes being scared).

The monkeys eyes stare at me, sparkling.

it certainly does have on eerie tinge to it. 0.o

keep on writing japanese poems! (but please translate them )

I'll try to make them more.. poetic next time, it's just that (believe it or not) it's the first time I ever wrote a poem that wasn't a haiku and didn't rhyme. Apparently, people like poems better if they rhyme.. so the next poem I write will. Thanks for your advice .

SC
suga CraZie chapter 1 . 12/9/2004
the words sound really smooth.. but sorry.. i cant speak japanese . can u translate it for me?