|Reviews for New Time, New Blade|
| K's Moonshadow chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
Absolutly lovely, dahlin. No explaination. It's the ones who are also trapped... we're the only ones that will ever even hope to understand.
| emily chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
Iwonder if you can understand the depth of what you have written. How hard it is too quit is portrayed perfectly whilst also describing that no cut is deep enough to hide the pain. Truely a work of art
| twistedtruths chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
I swear I had you on my author alert list. But I haven't any. argg.
anyways, i really loved this poem. It was really good. i can relate to it in so many was. Keep writing!
| apromptedpoet chapter 1 . 12/26/2004
Ok...So now I have finally realized what a phenomenal poet you are. This is definately my favourite as I can relate to it the most. Great job. Not only the poem, but YOU are on my faves _ Suiicdal_Greeting
| Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 12/14/2004
Flows beautifully, and getting things out in the open is a great release.I think its great that you share so much with people.
Keep it up.
| angel-of-woe chapter 1 . 12/10/2004
another brill poem, i liked the repeating of "i need more" at the end, it really put wmotion inot it.
keep it up : angel-of-woe
| Kressida chapter 1 . 12/10/2004
omg.. this was so beautiful and so sad it made me cry alex. the word flow is great, and i absolutely love it! def going on my fav list! and what you say is true and i can relate, as you know. and i forgive you, coz it is kinda about me right? and i feel this way too, and something happened in school today, but im gonna send you that mail i owe you - finally! and thanks for the reveiw, so much, and i sendt your pressie yesterday.. :D :D :D love ya! lots of love Zai
| Shadowed Mind chapter 1 . 12/9/2004
Beutiful poem. Well written and clearly expresses the emotions of many, finding the words we cannot speak. So don’t be mad, coz I can’t take that.
I need you to understand and forgive,
Coz I need our friendship.
I know I’ll die without it,
I love you no matter what.
I know what it feels like to have someone who sees the pain, begs you stop, but you can't. Keep writing, get your feelings out there. Love Miss-Fev
| Keith Andrew chapter 1 . 12/9/2004
Hey you already know what i think. Hmm... on reading this you might find that it goes far deeper than you just having a blunt blade, perhaps even the desire to stop. sometimes you can say stuff in poetry that youll only find months after writing, this is very interesting, love you-Keith Andrew
| Amethyst Eyed Cynical One chapter 1 . 12/9/2004
it i love it!the idea, the style...just perfect!