Reviews for The Dogs of War
Michael D. Garcia chapter 3 . 1/21/2005
The premise is really good, and I think you've got the start of gripping story. There are some parts of it that need improvement, such as the exposition of your universe details. Sometimes writers can get lost in paragaphs of explanations, but I think in this case maybe one or two paragraphs of outline would be necessary to set your scene up properly.

I also have a question about your characters, because it's not clear to me... but are Jabari and his friends cadets or commissioned officers?

I'm looking forward to seeing more, and I've put your story on author alerts so I can continue to read.

Best wishes,

Michael D. Garcia
trekker26233 chapter 1 . 12/10/2004
Great job!