Reviews for Average Night
Karma Chameleon chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
'Tis a good poem. Though it sounds like you are trying a bit to make it rhyme towards the end. Anyway nice job. ~Karma Chameleon
Keith Andrew chapter 1 . 12/10/2004
Okay very striking, wll written and with a nice flow. Such a sad dtory as well, really shocking and captivating-Keith Andrew
angel-of-woe chapter 1 . 12/10/2004
my fave bit of that poem was the line saying "life's lesson, but not learning" it really sims up your feelings, and a bit of mine to!