|Reviews for Escaping the Void|
| Chisai Neko chapter 1 . 1/6/2005
Your story's very well written. There's a lot of powerful emotion conveyed in simple words. You have much talent in that area.
The only thing that I have to say is that when most people jump, they usually fall head first.
P.S. Had to get a new account. I forgot my old password.
| Aeja Tsuki chapter 1 . 12/11/2004
... \ scary-ish
but i like AS ALWAYS! )
"life has ups and downs, but it is what you make it." was that a mistake on the last line? was it supposed to be "what you make OF it"?don't remember... gotta refer back to the original poem...
| Ethereal Oceans chapter 1 . 12/11/2004
OMG! This is awesome. I loved it. It's so sad... Keep writing
| dakiddy chapter 1 . 12/11/2004
i gotta say, this is a great piece of writing, and you better not be considering suicide, if so, send me a message, and i'll tell you how to kill yourself like a man or woman, or w/e, you get the point.