lol! I love it! I can totally relate to this- minus the fire and police. . .~Lauren

haha! nice. It's all sweet and mushy and then the guy's shoe catches on fire! it's full of surprises, eh? the last bit reminds me of that 80's song- "we're runnin' just as fast as we can! holdin' on to one another's hand! trying to get away, into the night, then you put your arms aroung me and we tumble to the ground and then you say, 'I think we're alone now...' " hehe, sorry, i got a little excited there. Anyway, great poem!

I have to say...this one made me roll with laughter...you painted a really good visual of the nightI was waiting for the next line to have one of you biff it in the sand while running...haha...good work

XD That was awesome.