Reviews for Both Of Us
Amethyst Eyed Cynical One chapter 1 . 12/14/2004
wow!i loved this!especially the line 'coz you come with secrets...'loved cool rhyming btw.
pandora505 chapter 1 . 12/12/2004
It reminds me of what happened recently between one of my friends and a guy. You know your own feelings, but to make into something as relateable as this is excellent.
Keith Andrew chapter 1 . 12/11/2004
pretty good, the lines seemed sligtly too long though, maybe if you broke them up at the pause in the center. Very well written though, love you-Keith AndrewOh and don't worry about that, I'm fine