Reviews for Daddy
Not Quite Dry Eyed chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
sometimes i feel this way about my dad he doesn't know i'm really there, like he doesn't care...i work hard to try and get him to notice me but he still doesn't care... i tend to realize a lot of the tings you write about are the things i feel...great job with emotion...keep writing...

lordelfy chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
u must really love ur dad...great poem..i like ur style of writing!
EWindheim chapter 1 . 3/4/2005
I feel this way about my dad too. I really enjoyed this poem. Has a nice flow and sound to it.~Hawke
THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
Written from the heart. Sometimes you have to accept people and look at how they express what you want. Maybe he goes to work every day faithfully and expresses it that way...just an idea. hugs :)
AllyCred chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
lovely...this one i think is my fav...i wrote something similiar called Respect but mine is very different more harsh i think...but nicely done flows amazingly well and is very poetic...i love it. lots of love ~AllyCred~
apromptedpoet chapter 1 . 2/6/2005

This really gets me right here *points to heart*

You know how dad's are I mean, they're not really emotional, cuz I guess they're kinda scared to show that you know?

But still, I hate it when they get all pissing-me-offish. It gets SO annoying eh?

Anyway. Great poem babe, it really rocked SO hard! I'm faving it for sure! :D

Much Love-Suicidal_Greeting