i haven't read a story written like this and i like it so far, so keep updating!

this story has got to be one of my favorite story ever! you are def a cool writer continue!

PEACE!

I forgot why I love you, and then I read this story. The thought that ran through my head was, "Oh yeah."

I love it. If I could make images jump off the page like you can, I'd be happy forever. But I can't. So I live vicariously through your Rilo and your Raphael. It's beautiful.

I can't wait to see where this goes. Update now. Damn it.

Incredible. That's what this story is.

I have no words anymore...

I'm speechless at how brilliant this story is!

"Cast from the regret of their preciously precocious high school whores/Who know their own name as well as they don't know yours"

That blows my mind.

Raphael is a god. And so are you for writing this.

Make babies with me.

Please.

"candy cigarette moments of radiant confession." Beautiful. I love this story. Great job!

I like Coop- definitely a cool character. "ink breathing on his skin" is a way I've never thought about it, but it fits so perfectly.

I like how you describe Raphael's blue like the color of blue bubblegum. Brings right to mind that artificial-blue bubblegum color. Anyway, "the only sin that's left is the sin of confirmity." Lovely.

Breathtaking and beautiful, as always. I still get sad near the end of this chapter, even though I know how it really ends. "Bullet eyes and shotgun smiles" Perfect.

What is there to say that I haven't said? This is utterly gorgeous. "Push your glasses yp and knock-sock-em till he's dead" That is an awesome line.

You write poetry like I would love to.