Reviews for Unnatural Sunday
inconsequential me chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
Gah, this is so ridiculously impressive... Seriously, you're a very talented writer and you have an incredible dialect. It was full of useful paradoxes, imagery and just out of this world concepts... kudos.
vanderhall chapter 1 . 12/13/2004
this is amazing. I know I say that all the time but I mean it. I saw the first couple lines in the summary and I was just amazed: "Blue hair, blue eyes -you're so sweet you make me cry." that took me and I had to read the story. I love this so much. and the ending was great, the way it worked with the same little theme (okay, I don't mean theme, per say, but I can't think of the correct word, please forgive me) as the first line.

beautiful. simply and utterly beautiful.
kit feral chapter 1 . 12/12/2004
Where do you get this stuff? You rock! *cough stop neglecting your stories cough* Keep it up!