|Reviews for Frozen Heart|
| Michael Dempsey chapter 15 . 1/10/2006
YAY ooh yay! This is great, and the story gets gorier by the chapter! [eyes widen in incredulity] I'm enjoying it, not becoming bored by it! I'm going to read the next chapter now!
One criticism is that in a dialogue a new line/paragraph should begin where a different character speaks. The first part of the chapter, with Quinn and Matt, was a bit difficult to read because you didn't do this. But that's the only concern!
Thank you so much for your reviews! :D
| Holli-chan Stevens chapter 16 . 1/8/2006
Wo! A bit gory, but very entertaining... *wails* Zyrinth! noo, my Zyrinth... Augh! And he was my favorite!
Anyway, keep it up. ;) Byes!
| Holli-chan Stevens chapter 15 . 1/7/2006
Nice. The action is heightening, we're getting to see more of the character's personalities. Some parallel action going thre, something I was never quite able to do. A bit gruesome. o_0 Keep it up!
| Carbon Slash chapter 16 . 1/7/2006
Ooh. A cliffie. that's so evil XD Update soon, k? Love this chapter :)
| Lord Iceberg chapter 16 . 1/6/2006
This just keeps getting better and better! And the names of your characters RULE. I really need to sit down and read this from start to finish to actually understand what's going on; a chapter every three months can kinda confuse you. But great job!
| laura sedai chapter 10 . 1/6/2006
Who are the goodies and the baddies in the Mystic World? I am still reading, I'm just not reviewing everyone single chapter. Sorry!
| laura sedai chapter 2 . 1/6/2006
Excellent logic! "Kill her before she kills you." Ice is a lot more rebellious know, but I think I would be too if I was locked up by my mother for 10 years! I like Fantasy, she's a really good character.
| laura sedai chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
That is amazing! I feel so sorry for Ice! Imagine having a mother like that. I don't think the last sentence really fitted with what I'd already seen of Ice, but if you meant it to be like that it doesn't matter. Just my opinion!
| Plinky chapter 16 . 1/6/2006
Oh, good chapter. ;-D
The little romanticky bit in the car was a.d.o.r.a.b.l.e! Absolutely. Gorgeous. I was holding my breath!
And i -loved- the sentence "A parody of tears" beautiful.
You must update sooner this time! ;D
| Tzotel431 chapter 16 . 1/6/2006
Wonderful chapter! And long awaited! I like Matt, he's cute and considerate. Ice should like him too! OMG! what's gonna happen with the war? More please! Reign can't give in! NO!
| Shadow Whirlwind chapter 15 . 12/27/2005
I'm sorry it took so long... forgive me? *pleading look*
I can't believe I almost forgot the plot of this thing! Stupid me... I reread the entire story, and I am once again under the spell of your story!
I shall once again 'encourage' you! _
Prepare to have me bug you come January!
I so love this story...
Good Luck! _
~your Major... joke! lol :p
two sweet adorable creatures merryl and chris? wha-?
| Wing Chant chapter 14 . 12/24/2005
Whoa...the plot thickens. Fantasy is evil and should burn! _ I wish there was more of Ice in this chapter. ( Oh well...it t'was good, nevertheless. _
| Wing Chant chapter 13 . 11/30/2005
YOU DIDN'T TELL ME YOU UPDATED! *pokes you with a stick* That is evil! ( *cries* *mourns*
*2 hours later*
Okay, back to my old self. ) I'm very happy you have more chappies up for me to read. I think the controversy between Matt and Ice is humourous. XD Hehe. Matt and his cockiness. *shakes head* Ah, well... D I cross my fingers that Matt doesn't learn of Ice's true identity. Being a banished Goddess and all, I don't think that would go over well with assasins in the real world. Ha-ha.
The meeting scene was quite interesting. Very, how we kind people like to say, intriguing. I wonder what decision the council will come too? YOU LEFT A CLIFF HANGER! YOU ARE EVIL! *chucks an apple at your head* BAH on you!
Just kidding, I still heart you! *friendship hug* D
By the way, I too, have updated a story. It's got the prologue up and the first chapter up! It's called "The Stains of Steel." Why, you ask? Because the plotline of the story has a 15 year old girl travels back in time into the Soviet Union (when Joseph Stalin ruled Communist Russia)by a "mysterious" fairy necklace (O) she finds. And since Joseph Stalin was such an evil dictator, he was known as the "Man of Steel." So then, I thought...hey? Stainless steel...Stains of Steel! _ It works! It's a pun off his old nick name. Voila! lol
Anyways, hopefully in the near future (like in 2035) you'll be able to read it one day ( P But, until then, I'll just keep tuning in to Frozen Heart, BECAUSE I won't be waiting that long for the next chapter *angry fist shake*. D Okay?
Sincerely, your non-psychotic friend
| NIC MIRUSAKI chapter 15 . 11/24/2005
ey its me continue! make sumthin happen with ice and matt comeon cuz! miss you!
| Plinky chapter 15 . 11/23/2005
You're back! *Beaming plinky*
Aw, Matt's so lovely.
I like all the action going on with the goddesses.
Thanks for your lovely reviews! They really made me laugh! Lol.