Reviews for The Potato Baby
hazeleyedgypsy chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
Jeez, Matilda. Took me forever to find your story. It hasn't changed... But it's still cool! You should read mine. My pen name thingy is Melaina Riche. Why is your name name withheld. can't belive I didn't remember that. I just talked to Dacey. Appearantly, I have no social life and therefore am not worth talking to... Hi Matilda! Whoa, dazavous, how is that spelled? It was a spelling word in 5th grade but I was asleep or not listening... I'm Matilda's cousin, Matilda's friens that I don't know and are problably freaked out by this... In Alice in Wonderland, stupid movie by the way, how did she fit in the rabbit hole? Bye? :)
MEH chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
Wow. You're right. This story DOES go fast. Hmm... I'll have to fix that... tons of grammer errors. Total cliffhanger at the end. I'll have to work on this. Okay then. Yeah. Whatever. I'm pathetic, aren't I? Leaving reviews on my own crap...~Name Withheld
Mumbo Four Message Board chapter 1 . 1/17/2005
Matilda,Wonderful story...You seem to relate to how I feel sometimes...perhaps we could be email buddies? I mean...I really need one to talk to, too...Well...plz consider, or just email me...~Darkness and Dreams
blessings chapter 1 . 12/24/2004
hi. This seems like its gonna be a reali gd story. cant wait for the next chapter!
Coeur Mysterieux chapter 1 . 12/20/2004
wow! this is really good! it is awful that adelaide's mother is an alcoholic... amy seems sort of... "protective" of chase... it is sort of weird. one tip though - try separating each chapter so that you have to click on the little arrow to make it go to the next one. it works better.

luv ya, doll!~tinkerbell booberry (kiersten)
Fiery Secrets of My Heart chapter 1 . 12/12/2004
Hmm...let's see! A GIRL who is IN LOVE with her BEST FRIENDS OLDER BROTHER! Who just HAPPENS to be two grades above her...THIS SOUNDS FAMILIAR! HAHAHA! Sorry. I had to do that. This is really good...so she has an INHALER? REALLY! OMG TOTAL CLIFFHANGER AT THE END! GRR! But clarify one thing: Emi-I mean AMY is against Adelaide and Sc-I mean...um...what's his name? Oh yah! Chase getting together, am I right? Yes? No? Maybe? PIE? Sorry...I'm hyper...and bored...and I really do love the story. It's so good. Keep writing.

Putting a signed review on something automatically tells them your screenname...thank you! ~mE
Sunset.Smile chapter 1 . 12/12/2004
Good story! I like where this is going, I'd just like to see you put some more details into what's happening, you know, maybe develop the plot a little further. Like when they laughed at Amy's potato..just stretch it out a little, you know? It seems sort of rushed in places. Other than that, this is awesome. Keep up the good work!~Jess
tender-kisses chapter 1 . 12/12/2004
I really like your story so far.I hope you post more soon.
name withheld chapter 1 . 12/12/2004
Hey, look! It's my story! That has almost nothing to do with my life! Wow! Now I must go and write a story that does! Awesome! You may find that I use the name Chase a lot. Sorry. It's 12:43pm and I only woke up half and hour or so ago, so I'm completely out of it. I'm not actually like this (most of the time) at all. But still. It's my STORY! NIFTY!