Reviews for Snow Speaker
Guest chapter 29 . 11/24/2012
This is a totally great story! Why don't you get it published?
There are some miss spelling left, for example conscious instead of consciousness in several places.
Rikard of Sweden
musha chapter 17 . 6/9/2008
That was incredibly awesome; the Avin possession part. This story is very professional and I look forward to seeing it in animation if you choose to do so. Your art is fantastic by the way.

When I first started this book, I got so lost with the constant introductions of characters and places, but just because of your writing style I held through it and I am so glad I did. I still don't have everything down yet, but it's not like you have as many characters as, say, Robert Jordan (who introduces a bit slower than you I think) or Tolkien (who names people even though you only see them for a sentence or two). I'll have you know I am not studying for the ACS exam because of you! (That's the college organic chemistry standardized exam, which covers a year of learning, and is thus a major compliment.)
Crewger chapter 29 . 12/26/2006
Fire dancer. Dude, you have the best plot ever! It's just like the humungus 10 page book (I forgot the title) that I had the courage to read (it's pretty good after the second chapter, too many characters). It needs revision and stretched out longer but no worries! Your awesome!
Washer chapter 29 . 7/29/2005
It's summer vacation now, and that means I have too much time on my hands. I've been reading novels voraciously, and going through fictionpress as well for novel length works. I checked yours out and was much impressed. It's well written, it has good characters, gripping storyline, the works. My one complaint is that in the fashion of epic fantasy, it has the kind of story arc Robert Jordan does a spit-take upon hearing. I'm going to have to be a fan for quite some time to see this project done. Oh, and what's up with those names? Those are stupid. I'm not even going to read it.
Danica chapter 29 . 7/8/2005
This was absolutely awesome. I look forward to the finished sequel.
The Ordained chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
well, i know your finished the story and all lol...i came by it when i read the note for new readers on your other novel...

But, meh lol, i had to say that its gold anyway. I really liked the first chapter...war soon lol. YAY i like war.

Anyways, great job on the beggining of your first novel ;)
mad-man2 chapter 29 . 6/17/2005
and you didnt proff these? could have fooled me.

i would voit for fire dancer but i havent read your blues ones yet.

ill let you now in a reveiw of those.

later the MAD-MAN
FiLLiPA chapter 29 . 6/14/2005
I'd have to say Fire Dancer but thats only because I haven't yet read the Blue Story
jon-1308 chapter 29 . 6/12/2005
I've read this all the way through. I love the way you update very regularly - I find it provides better continuity than if you just update once a month.

And, above all, I would like to see the story finished. So, do the Fire Dancer sequel next, rather than the new Blue story. Please ;)
wraith chapter 29 . 6/10/2005
Fire Dancer
kaia chapter 29 . 6/10/2005
an amazing story, you really know how to bring the characters to life, the plot is always throwing something new at you but it doesnt get old, it flows and captures the readers interest.

i love the stoey and cant wait to see where u take it. id like for fire dancer, but do what you feel!.
You Need More Flair chapter 29 . 6/10/2005
Dammit! Don't make me choose between Blue and Vorchay! I'd DIE! I have emotional investment in both of them...

*Sigh* I have to leave for school, so I'm gonna give a better review when I get back.
FiLLiPA chapter 27 . 6/7/2005
Thanks for updating so fast! so please continue at the same rate! the story getting even more interesting (not that it wasn't greatly interesting before..._) Anyways...Great work!
Ankle chapter 26 . 6/5/2005
Okay... so i want you to work with me here.. see in my mind I know that Vorchay is a Snow Speaker and all but snow is really just another form of water so why doesnt she have an affinity to the other forms of water? Just curious... Love it though. Vorchays my hero hehe
SomniaRie chapter 26 . 6/5/2005
It's nice to see this side of Etrayos - something a little different.

Finally everything is falling into place! Schiard is Vesmos' daughter, eh? This should be interesting.

I like it when Vorchay and Raedoch interact - they're such an unlikely pair.
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