Oh... You have a sister anticipating the next chapter. I'm very interested in seeing what happens... I have an idea, but I won't reveal it, cause it might be wrong. I'm very happy that Schiard came back! Yeah... She can be an ass at times, but she is cool as all get out. I very much enjoyed Etrayos... I knew he was gonna get that evil som-muh-muh-bitch Kava... ;)

I can't wait for the last few chapters, and I can't wait for Fire Dancer.

Dammit. I didn't even know you'd updated! I suddenly have like a hundred emails in my inbox, and three chapters from this story that I missed! Life sucks ass.

Very good job... It seems like Vorchay's fate to be at war with something...

Etrayos is gonna beat a bitch's ass, ain't he? Kava won't know what hit her!

I miss Schiard and all them...

Okay, um, as far as more detail goes, how's this: Your title for this chapter on the little clicky listy thing is messed up. It says TWentyFive.

I know it's a little annoying to get reviewers that are so nonspecific, but I just don't have very much to say. Your writing style is very good, and the plot seems to have a healthy progression. It's not boring, but it took me a while to read.

Um, deatail:Fav. Character: probably Vorchay or one of the twin kings (can't remember thier names, but they're cool)

That's enough detail for now. Yeah, I have nothing to say. Sorry be being like taht, I just thought you'd want to know that I was reading it.

Oh yeah, and I'm very happy that you updated.

I've finally read up to the last updated chapter!Yay! It's a great story and definitely fantastically written!Vorchay is a great character and is not the stereotypical main character type and so can be easily update ASAP!

I like this story, and figured that I'd finally review. It took me a really long time to read, which is unusual, but it's very good. I have to laugh at Vorchay though, she's a coward. Haha. Yeah, very un-steriotypical I guess.

Ah! Cliff hangers are death. But this was a good death. I didn't realize that Avin was going under such a drastic transformation. I imagine she's quite impressive with fangs. Anyway, great chapter, great descriptions ( I wish I could be bedecked in gold) great plot development...I only wish I could better communicate my praise.

AH- i cant believe it just stopped. I am completely wrapped into this work. I adore Vorchay. She is so not the typical heroic courages warrior that i love her.

Well this may be a "get them there" chapter, but it's marvelous nonetheless. I would say more, but I need to go back to work. Happy writing!

This story is fascinating. At this point, character development is going beautifully and I suspect it gets better in later chapters. I have only one small suggestion. There are several confusing references in the story. (meaning too many shes, hes and its)but other than that I think your doing great.

I love Avin! I don't want her to be possessed by demons... But I'm glad she is still loyal to Vorchay...

I like possessive Etrayos. Almost as much as I like Vorchay wanting to defend her own pride.

I'd like to fondle Etrayos. I'd really enjoy that, I think...

I can't wait to see Vorchay's idea come into fruition... Hopefully it'll involve a nakey Etrayos.

Man, I must have sex on the brain or something. Hehehe.

Ooh, Etrayos is posessive! The three of them together are so funny, I love Odocorr's observations of Etrayos and Vorchay.

Do you think we can see a bit more of Schiard and Raedoch? I feel like they've been a bit ignored. And what about the elf boy? I forgot his name, but he was a lovely character that hasn't returned yet. Is he going to come back any time soon?

I love Etrayos. With firey passion. Uh-huh... He is a sexy beast... I am in love with him. I wish I had an Etrayos...

I LOVED this chapter! It's easy to get caught up in other, bigger things and forget the funny everyday crap like embarassment about being stinky.

Great job...

I'm intrigued by Nyvestein and the curse left by Casine. There must be much more to the story of the gods.

I just have to say...I'm THRILLED that you're only a third of the way through. I don't know what I'll do when this one is done with, but from the looks of it, that's a long way off.

I really like the summary for the story...

And YAY! I caught a PLOT POINT! YAY! By the way, soon my name shall be changed. Muahaha... In fact, I'm gonna go change it before I finish this review! -I just changed it, now! I am the artist formerly known as Woman Who Sold the World. Or You Need More Flair, 'cause I've been watching Office Space... I know it's not much shorter, but I figure you could call me anything and I'd still be happy as long as you updated... Okay, on to the real review!

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"Was it the damn kelp?" - Funniest. Line. Ever.

I'm still SO worried about Avin... I bet I'm more worried that Vorchay! Blah, I'm such a weirdo when it comes to animals...

I really like Etrayos and Vorchay together. I'm glad you're not gonna rush the relationship like some authors do... Then again, you rarely ever do those horrid things many authors on this site do, myself included...

So good job, homie. I'm jealous as hell, but good job...

Not much happened this time, 'cept for that bit at the beginning (which was very intriguing) and parts scattered through the chapter... It was short and very well written. Write some more, please... I'm gonna go look at de pictures now.

Bye.